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I'm afraid this companionship has reached an end
between me and my special so-called "friend."
I can't believe you or your sketchy ways,
your even shadier explanation for your delays.
It's a shame to see my friend of three years
become a danger, total stranger, the worst of all fears.
I should be angry, disappointed, upset, and ashamed,
but I wonder if, still, I'm the one to be blamed.
You could say it's my fault;
I made her run away, I can't complain,
But who am I to say she wouldn't run anyway?
I can't say I was oblivious, it was obvious.
The truth is, I've been in denial.
I'm not naive or incomplete, I refused to believe.
My heart couldn't handle it and so my brain took leave!
My hand's reaction is most loyal
to bow-- salute to every royal.
I've got compassion for disasters,
she's got a profession duplicating pastors.
She had my answers,
though, my questions-- insignificant.
Her only reaction seemed indifferent.
between me and my special so-called "friend."
I can't believe you or your sketchy ways,
your even shadier explanation for your delays.
It's a shame to see my friend of three years
become a danger, total stranger, the worst of all fears.
I should be angry, disappointed, upset, and ashamed,
but I wonder if, still, I'm the one to be blamed.
You could say it's my fault;
I made her run away, I can't complain,
But who am I to say she wouldn't run anyway?
I can't say I was oblivious, it was obvious.
The truth is, I've been in denial.
I'm not naive or incomplete, I refused to believe.
My heart couldn't handle it and so my brain took leave!
My hand's reaction is most loyal
to bow-- salute to every royal.
I've got compassion for disasters,
she's got a profession duplicating pastors.
She had my answers,
though, my questions-- insignificant.
Her only reaction seemed indifferent.
How do you like it?
What do you think?
Feel free to dissect it and tell me what you think it's about.
What do you think?
Feel free to dissect it and tell me what you think it's about.
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Seems like a sad story but it feels light-hearted, probably just because of the clever rhymes. If I was forced to make uninformed judgments about the writer I'd guess she wasn't so upset by this tragic event, maybe just trying to get it over with.